Wednesday, 27 October 2010

Recycling

L and I have been at my Mum's for a couple of days. She's ok - if cantankerous. Her back seemed not to be paining her much, though she said it was stiff in the mornings, and the problem with the shower is a structural one - currently a large step up to get in the cubicle (not sure why) - that she finds difficult to negotiate, as she does any and all changes of level.

Like old times, writing on the train on the way there. Some fragments...

The train flies along the line.
A banner of blue tops the window
and everything has its shadow.
The day cuts things out
and sticks them back on the world,
gives them outlines,
an air of importance.

Now in England on a red train
there is the small scratchy sound
of music leaking from headphones,
there are trainers and sneakers
brogues and biker boots
and the electric whirr of air con.
A man sings under his breath
another sleeps with his mouth open,
a little string of saliva attaching
upper lip to lower, sunlight
catching the smoothness
of his bald brown head.
Now at Stoke on Trent a grey train
waits at a platform,
a blonde woman on board laughs
still wearing her gloves.


Collecting rubbish on the train

Is that rubbish? asks the buzz-cut young man
with the black bin-bag, pointing
at our apple core where it rests
on the crushed empty juice carton,
his job to cruise up and down the aisles,
identify and remove the empty
the used, the discarded, being careful
to distinguish these from the half-full
the still in use, the still needed.

5 comments:

Dragonfly Dreams said...

So few words. So many visuals. Striking! Thank you! Hope all goes well.

Lucy said...

I especially like the last one; it would be easy to laugh at the young man asking the apparently daft question about the apple core, but you present him and his job with imagination and sympathy, make them seem honourable.

Hope Ma's problems can be at least partially resolved to make things better.

Marcheline said...

Great train of thoughts.

Jean said...

I love the 'collecting rubbish' poem a lot too. Lovely combination of the very concrete small details and the potentially vast question of what has already become rubbish.

Fire Bird said...

Thanks all. Yes, L and J, I found this rubbish collector's style very engaging and it made me think of the job differently. They usually say 'any rubbish?' as they waft past. This one actually took the trouble to look, and to ask, and that made it all seem more interesting, more complex (to me at least...)I just thought the question 'is that rubbish?' deserved reflection too. So maybe this will lead to more...